LIGHTNOVELONLINE Chapter 223 Poetry and Fishing
Everyone was playing and chatting by the river, while Qin Jiali was fishing with high spirits and mumbling words, while Xia Haoyang was thinking about the poem he had originally written. After some serious thinking, Xia Haoyang said happily, "Before The final revised version of that poem is here.”
The peaches are green, the grass and blue flowers are also red,
Butterflies and birds sing on the bank,
It’s a beautiful scenery along the river.
Take a leisurely half-day fishing trip.
"This is really good, Fatty. It rhymes more than before." Juzi gave Xia Haoyang a thumbs up.
"Fat man, you replaced Yayoi with Taoliang." Zhao Yishen smiled.
"The first thing I thought of was Mitsuki Yayoi. Although it has a sense of beauty, it is a Japanese name after all. It's not that our Chinese country doesn't have good names, so I changed it to Taoliang. It's a beautiful scenery by the river, although it means It's almost the same, but when it comes to saying it, I feel that the word "riverside" is more appropriate. The second sentence of "birds and butterflies flying in the ears" is not bad, but it doesn't rhyme. I saw the banyan tree next to it, so I changed it to "butterflies flying on the bank, birds flying and banyan trees". , the fourth game was also changed to a half-day fishing trip in Xianlai, also for the sake of rhyme, and this sentence is more in line with our reality."
"It's the beautiful scenery along the river. It's the beautiful scenery along the river. I feel the same," Quan Wenxin said.
"The meaning is almost the same, but the sense of language is better. Many times, the level and status of a poem are very different because of the difference of one word. For example, the spring breeze blows green on the south bank of the river. Previously, the author used the word "spring breeze blows on the south bank of the river again." The word "green" Appearing takes this poem up at least two notches.”
"Brother, I see that you need to revise many times to write a poem. The poem just now is about the beautiful scenery by the river. It is just four lines long, but you have revised almost every line." Zeng Jingyi said with a smile.
"It's normal. Poetry itself is quite sophisticated. Every word and word requires repeated trials and tribulations to choose the most suitable combination." Xia Haoyang took it for granted.
"But last time I saw you writing a song on the spot, you wrote it down smoothly, without changing a single lyric or a single note. Senior brother, are you so good at writing songs?" Zeng Jingyi looked admiring.
"Really? Haha, well, this, haha, actually I have been thinking about it for a long time, haha." Xia Haoyang touched his hair awkwardly, can this be the same? The poems are my own original works, and of course they need to be revised. I am not Li Bai, Du Fu, Su Shi, and Tang Bohu. I can compose poems in one go, which I cannot do. But for songs, we are moving them, so there is no need to modify them. But I can't say this, I can only laugh and let this matter go.
Xia Haoyang, Zhao Yishen, Zeng Jingyi and others were basking in the sun and chatting about poetry. Everyone was laughing and joking, but only one person was unhappy. "No more fishing. There aren't any fish here. I'm so angry." Qin Jiali exploded.
"That's not right, Sister Jiali, I even saw fish swimming around in the water plants." Xiao Mengyan said with her eyes wide open.
"Come on, Belle, let me give it a try." Zhao Yishen walked towards Qin Belle and took the fishing rod, while Qin Belle walked towards everyone in an angry manner.
"Come on, sister Jiali, don't be angry, eat an apple." Captain Shao Minzhi took the initiative to bring an apple to Qin Jiali.
Qin Jiali was biting a crisp apple, her cheeks were bulging, her brows were frowning, and she was still talking vaguely. Coupled with her beautiful face and eye-catching red hair, she was absolutely adorable in Xia Haoyang's eyes. .
Unexpectedly, the slap in the face came so quickly. Qin Jiali didn't finish an apple, and she didn't catch a fish after fishing for a long time. As a result, Zhao Yishen immediately caught a fish as soon as he took over. It felt like a pound, which was not too small. It immediately attracted everyone's attention, and everyone ran to Zhao Yishen yelling. After seeing Zhao Yishen put the fish into the bucket, everyone gathered around the bucket and looked at the fish in front of them and were very happy.
Not long after, there was another fish. Today Zhao Yi was so impressed that he caught two fish in a short period of time. It even caused cheers from several girls around him.
"Even the fish bully me, why can't I catch it?" Qin Jiali became even more unhappy.
"Come on, Jiali, I'll teach you." Zhao Yishen said with a smile.
"First, hang some food on the hook. In fact, live earthworms are best, but you can also do this. Then hold the fishing rod in your hand and feel it with your heart. If you feel that there is a fish eating the bait on your fishing rod, then like Lift the fishing rod like this, try it."
Sure enough, under Zhao Yishen's guidance, Qin Jiali also caught a very small fish, so small that it was not as long as Qin Jiali's finger. However, this was the first fish Qin Jiali caught today, and she was very happy.
"Okay, Shenzi, I've never seen you fishing before. Are you so sneaky?" Xia Haoyang looked on, feeling very impressive.
"Just because you haven't seen me doesn't mean I'm not fishing. I know you don't like it, so we don't call you when we go fishing occasionally. Brother Hong is the real master of fishing, and I'm far behind."
"That's it." Xia Haoyang nodded.
With the help of Zhao Yishen, almost all the girls caught fish with their own hands, but all the girls caught were small fish. In the end, after everyone's discussion, they were all put back into the Tanggu River, including the two fish caught by Zhao Yishen. A larger fish, about a pound, was also released by everyone. For a few girls, today’s trip was just for fun and to enjoy fishing.
In the afternoon, everyone went to the rock climbing club to watch Xiao Mengyan's individual speed competition. The result was very surprising, because several people performed very poorly in the last three-person team speed competition, so everyone was disappointed with today's individual speed competition. I didn’t have any hope in the competition, but I didn’t expect that Xiao Mengyan performed extremely stably and finally reached the finals among the 16 players, but unfortunately she lost to her opponent in the end.
After watching the rock climbing competition, Xia Haoyang indeed arranged for a feast to be served at a mutton restaurant selling Ningxia Tan sheep. Xia Haoyang ordered a roasted whole lamb.
"Come on, let's all have a drink together. This cup should be regarded as congratulations to Xiao Mengyan. Congratulations to Xiao Mengyan for reaching the finals of the rock climbing competition. We will continue to work hard and strive to win a trophy."
"cheers."
"Come on, Belle, let's have a drink too and congratulate you on catching a fish today." Xia Haoyang said with a smile.
"I won't touch it with you. This is fruit wine. If you drink too much, you will get drunk. I just plan to drink this one drink. The fat boss will go to Brother Zhao to fight over the bar."
"Shenzi has to drive later, so it's better not to drink. Okay, then I'll drink by myself." Xia Haoyang didn't mind drinking alone.
"Senior Brother Xia, I'll drink with you. Come and have a toast."
"Fourth Master Zeng is mighty." Qin Jiali and others shouted loudly.
"Jingyi? Okay, let's drink and finish."
Eating mutton and drinking beer, the four vulgar things have passed, the album sales are in full swing, and the movie "Extreme Escape" is about to be completed. All the bad things that have been surrounding it since years ago seem to have dissipated, and spring is coming. is here, will spring also come for Xia Haoyang and his studio?