I was rejected when I wrote a song, but I became a king on my debut

In the instructor's seat, Teacher Chen Mo looked at Zhou Yu's message about the song, and he and Brother Jun also looked at each other.

"His style is pretty good and his songs are very pure."

Wearing sunglasses and a cool look, Brother Jun nodded in agreement: "Although the songs written by Zhou Yu are simple, they sound different. That youthful and pure feeling is different from other students." It’s hard to see songs written with singers.”

Chen Mo also looked at Wen Shiyi aside and asked with a smile: "Shiyi, have you participated in Zhou Yu's new song?"

Wen Shiyi had been discussing the new song with Zhou Yu, and they felt that Zhou Yu's new song probably had some of Wen Shiyi's opinions in it.

"No, he wrote it himself."

Wen Shiyi shook her head. When she mentioned the new song to Zhou Yu before, Zhou Yu had already said that he was ready. She originally wanted to see if there was any problem, but Zhou Yu said it would be kept secret.

"Teacher Wen, you still don't believe me. There is nothing wrong with the songs I wrote. I know it myself."

Then, Zhou Yu kept whetting her appetite, and it wasn't until she got the information about Zhou Yu's songs today that she learned about the new song he brought this time.

Hearing Wen Shiyi's words, Teacher Chen Mo and the others were also stunned: "We know that he has no problem with his singing skills. I see you guys have been talking about the new song for so long, but he didn't ask you to help him check it out?"

Wen Shiyi looked at Zhou Yu on the stage and said helplessly: "He keeps his original songs very secret and is very confident in himself, so he didn't let me see it."

This guy just refused to join his company, but now he is his teacher, and in the end he didn't even give him a chance to watch his new songs.

Li Xue sneered in her heart, looking at Zhou Yu on the stage, she felt that this guy was really arrogant. And looking at his new song, it is still the same as before. The lyrics and music style are too simple, and there is no progress at all.

Zeng Huayu also shook his head. Zhou Yu, the student, really overestimated his abilities. Even the instructor couldn't give him an opinion after watching his new song. And this time there is no improvement at all. It is still the same as before. It is estimated that the voting score of the audience is also relatively low.

On the stage, Zhou Yu's singing continued.

"I want to hold your hand like this and never let go.

Can love be simple and harmless?

You lean on my shoulder

you fall asleep on my chest

life like this

i love you you love me

Want to love simply

I want to love simply..."

Many viewers at the scene were already immersed in Zhou Yu's song, and their minds were reminded of the simple and beautiful yearning for love when they were young. Simple and ordinary, being able to be with the one you love is enough.

At the end of the song, Zhou Yu bent down and expressed his gratitude to the audience instructor and the music teacher behind him.

At this time, Director Jiang Dan walked up with a pair of long legs. As he walked in the long slit skirt, a pair of beautiful legs were looming. Seeing Zhou Yu, Director Jiang Dan smiled slightly and then stood next to him.

"Thank you to student Zhou Yu for your wonderful performance. The voting channel has been opened. Audience friends who like Zhou Yu, please don't forget to vote..."

This is Zhou Yu looking at this legendary woman in the entertainment industry so close. She is in her mid-thirties, and there is no trace of time. But the mature charm exuding from her body is hard to look away from. Unlike Yang Qian, a mature lady, director Jiang Dan can more intuitively feel the mature charm of a woman, especially the strong woman's temperament in her, which makes people faintly afraid to look directly at her. Feel.

And Yang Qian, after all, is still young. Although she already has the charm of a mature woman, she still has a little bit of a sense of it, and she still has a kind of girlish playfulness in her body. This is also the reason why there are many heroines in the school days in the film and television dramas she starred in.

As for Wen Shiyi, she is a few years younger than Yang Qian. She is only twenty-six years old this year. She gives people the impression of a cold goddess, noble and elegant.

After Director Jiang Dan said a bunch of advertising words, Zhou Yu's voting channel was also closed, and the instructors began to comment on Zhou Yu's performance.

"Okay, Zhou Yu's audience voting is already in my hands, and the instructors' scores will be synchronized immediately. Let us first listen to the instructors' evaluation of Zhou Yu's performance..."

The first person to speak was Mr. Chen Mo, a talkative joker. He held the microphone and looked at Zhou Yu with a smile as he spoke.

"Come on, come on, I'm going to start talking."

"First of all, Zhou Yu, you are the first person who made me feel the sense of youth and purity in your songs, especially the love songs you wrote. Take today's simple love as an example. Simple and pure, it is the feeling of many people. In my youth, the ideal love in my heart..."

Teacher Chen Mo said a lot, mostly praising Zhou Yu. As he spoke, he turned to look at the audience behind him, pointed at Zhou Yu and said, "Also, let me tell you, Zhou Yu Among so many students, Yu is the one with the best basic skills. Everyone just listened to his performance, I believe you all felt it."

The audience also responded loudly: "Yes!"

Then Teacher Chen Mo changed the topic and looked at Zhou Yu: "That classmate Zhou, when our teachers were chatting just now, your teacher Wen complained that you didn't even show her your new songs. She complained to you for a long time. Woolen cloth."

Zhou Yu also didn't expect Teacher Chen Mo to say this. He glanced at Wen Shiyi, as if there was some resentment in his eyes.

Wen Shiyi was indeed a little resentful. She just stared at Zhou Yu, wanting to see how he would answer on the stage.

Yang Qian saw the excitement and said it was not a big deal: "Yes, classmate Zhou Yu, our teacher Shiyi is a little sad."

The audience likes to hear this, and they look like they are eating melons.

"Haha, and this matter, you see Goddess Shiyi staring at him like this, it must be true."

"This boy actually rejected our goddess Shiyi. He really deserves it."

"Haha, why do I feel that Goddess Shiyi is a little resentful? She is obviously a mentor, but she doesn't show the new songs to her students, haha."

"What's the point? Original songs are meant to be kept secret."

…

Backstage, Li Xingyu and the others frowned when they saw this scene, especially looking at Wen Shiyi's reaction. The iceberg goddess had never shown such a look to him.

However, Zhao Lei was surprised: "It must be Brother Yu who actually refused Teacher Wen to help her watch the song."

If he had a teacher who wanted to see his new song and give him some advice, he would definitely agree to it.

Zhou Yu was also a little embarrassed: "Well, isn't it because recording programs every day is too tiring, and Teacher Wen teaches us every day, so I'm afraid it will disturb Teacher Wen's rest."

Wen Shiyi snorted coldly in her heart, are you afraid of disturbing my rest?

This guy just feels like I can’t give him any opinion after watching his new song.

But to be honest, she was not good at composing, so she really couldn't give her any advice. She could only use her experience to help Zhou Yu judge whether the song would work.

At this time, she also picked up the microphone to help Zhou Yu out: "Actually, classmate Zhou Yu has very strong creative ability. We have also talked a lot about his new songs in private. We are all confident in the songs he brings this time. I believe that the audience will know what they know after listening to it, so I won’t say anything more..."

Wen Shiyi didn't comment much, and Brother Jun was good at rap and didn't say much. But when he arrived at Zeng Huayu's side, he frowned, looked at Zhou Yu's lyrics, and hesitated for a long time before speaking.

"I have some different opinions from other teachers. In the first period, I said that Zhou Yu's lyrics and music are not very good. It's the same problem this time. The lyrics and music are too simple..."

Zeng Huayu said a lot, all of which were saying that Zhou Yu's lyrics and music were too simple, the lyrics were too casual, and the music was too concise.

"But it's normal. You have just started writing, and you can slowly polish the lyrics and music later. I hope you can come up with songs that will surprise me in the future..."

Later, Li Xue also agreed with Zeng Huayu's statement: "I think so too. Although it sounds good, Zhou Yu, your lyrics and music are too simple. You need to work more on your lyrics and music."

Many viewers at the scene were also fans of Zeng Huayu. Regarding his comments, many viewers nodded and thought they were reasonable.

"Indeed, this simple love song is relatively simplistic."

My idol is a professional, so he is right.

Wen Shiyi and the others didn't say anything. Zeng Huayu had high requirements for lyrics and music, and it was normal to have different opinions from them. After all, not everyone could like Zhou Yu's style.

Director Jiang Dan is quite satisfied with this kind of debate between mentors. Only when there is debate is there something interesting.

Li Xingyu and the others also sneered. Sure enough, they were right. Zhou Yu's lyrics and music were still not up to par with the two teachers. This also meant that Zhou Yu's score with the instructor would not be very high.

"Then let me announce that the audience vote Zhou Yu received in this game is..."

We had not been to the second round, so we had already expected it. The data during our recommendation period was too poor, especially the lack of volume. In the previous round, others collected at least two hundred a day. After one round of my collection, plus warehousing, I collected forty or fifty in one day. But our retention is quite high, which means we still have a chance to be resurrected.

That is to say, next Tuesday, as long as the follow-up data is good and the follow-up meets the requirements for the second round, it can still be resurrected.

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