Grandpa's great writer

Chapter 1011 Hu Yaya and Hu are right

Zhang Zhong flipped through it casually first, and the length of Pengpeng's "novel" turned out to be unexpectedly long.

Pengpeng usually writes essays every day, but the length of her essays is only two or three pages at most, and will not exceed four hundred words.

In most cases, the length is only about [-] words.

And the small notebook that Zhang Zhong was holding had eight or nine pages.

The word spacing and line spacing are relatively large, but even so, these eight or nine pages can write thousands of words.

Of course, a thousand words is nothing to Zhang Zhong. Even if he is not transcribing, but writing by himself, he can write hundreds of words an hour when he is slow. Sometimes when inspiration comes, it is possible to write three or four thousand words an hour. .

"How long have you been writing this novel?" Zhang Zhong looked at Pengpeng and asked.

Pengpeng smiled and said, "I've been writing for two weeks."

For two weeks, this speed is normal.

And seeing that there are a lot of alterations on it, Peng Peng should have spent a lot of time revising her novel.

"Hu Yaya and Hu Duiduo are two sisters. One is seven years old and the other is eight years old. Hu Yaya is the older sister, and Hu Duidui is the younger sister. Hu Yaya is in the third grade this year, and Hu Duidui is only in the second grade..."

Zhang Zhong began to look seriously.

There are only about 4 words in total, and it only took Zhang Chong three to four minutes to read it. If it weren't for the large number of alterations, this time could be shortened.

Pengpeng's novel mainly talks about a pair of little sisters. One day, on their way to school, the two sisters took a path that they had never walked before in order to speed up.

Usually no one walks on this path, except for the dense bushes, you can also hear the miserable cry of crows.

The younger sister, Hu Duidui, was relatively timid, and wanted to drag her sister away after only a few steps.

As the elder sister, Hu Yaya is much more courageous and insists on taking the path, because if she does not take the path, she will be late and be punished by the teacher. If that is the case, it will be even more terrifying.

They didn't encounter any danger on the path, but they came across a magical tree hole. Out of curiosity, they went into the tree hole and saw many beautiful elves.

The elf welcomed them especially and played with them all day.

After a day passed, the two of them remembered that they hadn't gone to school, so they said goodbye to the elf in a hurry.

Unexpectedly, although they played with the elves in the tree hole for a day, the outside world did not change at all. In the end, the two arrived at school on time and were not punished.

The story ends here.

Zhang Zhong felt... Actually, this little story is pretty good—for a primary school student.

It has many disadvantages of course.

From the perspective of the storyline, the plot setting of this novel is very problematic. Who would find a path that has never been taken before and take a shortcut just because he is going to be late for school?
After all, no one knows where the path leads.

It might be better if this episode were replaced by two children going out to play and encountering this path by chance.

Of course, there are some special aspects of the storyline, such as the time lapse in the elf tree hole is different from the real world, which is very sci-fi thinking.

Pengpeng must have written this way because she thought so herself.

She probably also wants to meet an elf tree hole, have a group of elves play with her, and then play for a day without delaying school.

When you think about playing, you can still think about not delaying your studies, which is not bad.

In terms of writing techniques and expressions, this "novel" is terrible.

The most important thing is that there is a lot of nonsense in it, such as the introduction at the beginning.

For things that can be expressed in a simple sentence, she has to add several sentences, and the meanings are all repeated.

But Zhang Zhong didn't tell Pengpeng about the problems in the novel, he was actually very satisfied with his daughter's Virgo.

Among other things, being able to spend two weeks writing a novel and expressing roughly what she wanted to express is already very remarkable, and she is only a primary school student.

So Zhang Zhong didn't tell her anything about the structure of the story, the way of expression, or the writing technique. He just circled some wrong words and misused words in the novel and asked her to correct them.

"You haven't mastered these words yet. I have circled them. You can study them carefully." Zhang Zhong said.

Pengpeng nodded in disappointment, "I see."

She showed her father the novel she had written hopefully, hoping to get his praise, of course, but father didn't say anything, only found typos in the article.

Zhang Zhong knew the reason by looking at his expression, and said with a smile, "This novel is not finished yet, did Hu Yaya and Hu Dui pair go to that tree hole later? Do those elves know them? Would they not?" I wonder why the time inside the tree hole is different from the time outside? Is this tree hole known only to the two of them, and no one else has ever entered it?"

Peng Peng scratched his head and was at a loss for these questions suddenly asked by Zhang Zhong in front of him, "I haven't thought about these."

"But Dad really wants to know. This story is very attractive. I really want to know what happened next, but you haven't thought about it. I'm so disappointed." Zhang Zhong made a very disappointed expression.

Hearing Zhang Zhong say that this story is very attractive, and he really wants to go straight to my follow-up story, Peng Peng's eyes that were originally full of disappointment suddenly lit up, "Really? Daddy, do you really like to read it?"

"Of course, don't you think this story is not attractive?" Zhang Zhong said.

Pengpeng smiled and said, "Dad, don't worry, I'll think about it now, and I'll show it to you when I finish writing it."

"And me." Xu Yuhan said beside him, "I want to see it too."

Pengpeng was even happier, and said with his head held high, "Okay, then wait for me."

This girl is also a character of doing what she says, she took back her novel from Zhang Zhong, then ran back to her room with a toot, and started to create.

Looking in the direction of Pengpeng's room, Xu Yuhan smiled and shook her head, "Could it be that our family is going to produce a second writer?"

Zhang Chong said with a smile, "I think she is more likely to become a painter."

In terms of talent, Peng Peng's talent in art is definitely better than ordinary people.As for literary talent, it is much more ordinary.

The reason why she can do what she is now is also related to her writing of small essays all the time. Naturally, she is better than ordinary children if she writes a lot.

To describe it in two words, then Pengpeng's artistic talent is innate, while her creative talent is acquired through subtle influence.

He looked at Xu Yuhan again, "Our family should have two painters first."

(End of this chapter)