LIGHTNOVELONLINE Edits are done!
Hello everyone,
I hope you're all in good health. I am thrilled to inform you that I've finished the second draft of the book. Most issues were addressed, including Michael's recklessness and the way he played into Lohann's plan, his lack of coordination with his allies, and much more. A new Dungeon was added, alongside new Skills. Lohann was given more depth, changing him from a one-dimensional psychopath. In short, much was changed and rewritten.
I feel like I can confidently say that the second draft is better than the first. I hope I've managed to fix most of the story's glaring issues and some of the minor ones.
As I said before, the edited second draft will only be available on Amazon and Kindle Unlimited. I don't know when I'll be stubbing, but should be soon. I'll also rewrite a bit of the second book and start re-posting it.
Best regards,
L.E. Miranda.