LIGHTNOVELONLINE Edited Version was Added!!
Hello everyone,
I've finished uploading the edited version of Book 1. All previous chapters were deleted, including those belonging to Book 2, since I had to rewrite those anyway. For now, I'll wait a few days and let you guys catch up before starting to post the new Book 2 chapters, especially since I need to give them one last look.
When it comes to changes, most of them happened in the second half of the book. The Labyrinth chapters are entirely new and take place between Derek's defeat and seeking Lohann. I thought it would be better to add in more progression and a Dungeon in that section of the book. Nevertheless, most chapters, from beginning to end, got changed at least a bit. If you guys are up for it, I'd recommend a re-read, even if only to better understand where the story is at and to see if your criticism was addressed.
Please tell me of whatever flaws you find in the edited version of the story. I'd also appreciate positive ratings and reviews. Thank you all for continuing to stick with my story. I will do my best to match your expectations.
With gratitude,
L.E. Miranda.